You have some good shot variety at some points and match-on-action. The continuity works well and I like how the music acts as kind of an ironic undertone for the argument. Try to have a balance and continuity in the shot-reverse shots, so the framing is maintained in both shots. Also, try not to have shots that go on for too long without anything exciting happening (like the shot where she is walking in the Hub). A good start for you preliminary!
You have some good shot variety at some points and match-on-action. The continuity works well and I like how the music acts as kind of an ironic undertone for the argument.
ReplyDeleteTry to have a balance and continuity in the shot-reverse shots, so the framing is maintained in both shots. Also, try not to have shots that go on for too long without anything exciting happening (like the shot where she is walking in the Hub). A good start for you preliminary!